I'm writing a universal fan-fiction, using all the best mecha series!
I'm using my life and my friends, along with-
Zone of the Enders
The GUNDAM Series
Neon Genesis Evangelion

Me and my friends, as 14-year-old children are chosen for Project-MS- a top secret military project headed up by NERV, essentially for the Evangelion mark-2, AKA, the Gundam.
Half of my friends are killed in our first mission ( <_> )and I try to quit- but if I wanna quit, they have to kill me. Sucks, right? I escape in my Gundam, and am captured by and underground anti-NERV organization, ran by Shinji Ikari, and Leo Stenbuck.
Leo soon discovers the AI helping me run my Gundam was a copy of ADA.

....that's essentially the first 3 chapters. It's turning out great so far.

Can I get some feedback?


PROGRESS:


PROLOGUE - Unwritten

CHAPTER 1 - Unedited, unrevised
CHAPTER 2 - Unedited, unrevised
CHAPTER 3 - Unedited, unrevised
CHAPTER 4 - In progress
CHAPTER 5 and on - Unwritten

EPILOGUE - Unwritten

wow im not much into fan fiction, but this one got my atention
"shinji and leo stenbuck" i shat brix when i read that
it would be awesome, are you gonna post it here? or are you gonna write it at some other website

but also make sure you have the name of the models on the mechas
cuz hardcore fans may want to know witch mech it is you are reffering and probably try to visualice it

EXTRA!: Yeah, Leo and Shinji are founders of an underground organization to stop the tyranny of NERV- NERV stole ADA and trashed Jehuty, and the main character finds out that ADA was copied and put into the mass-production frames they are using. Current Quest? Find the real ADA, stop NERV (they're trying to take over the world. Typical, I know- but any more info would spoil a lot of the story.)

Trust me, I've got everything figured out- mech names and all. Don't worry, just because I say 'Jehuty was trashed' doesn't mean somebody won't find it.

trashed jehuty?!?! WTF
that makes no sence, jehuty is EXTREMELY superior to any movile suit
and/or eva, why trash such a baluable mech like that, i wanna see a movile suit
or gundam doing zero shift, or vecta cannon.
BUT TRASHED, i aint too happy about that, i could understand they "put it away for future use" lets say fuse it with an eva or movile suit.
i know its fan fiction but i am a fan ass well and that (trashed) dosen't sound very nice you know

Don't worry, Jehuty wasn't exactly 'trashed', persay, NERV stole ADA and essentially abandoned Jehuty in an secret area (read it when it comes out ) and Leo finds it. He has to teach himself to pilot without a battle AI, but he gets along. Celvice inherits Vic Viper and they fight together,

I updated the page, there is now a section for my progress on the story- I'll update it when necessery, I'm not about to give up on it or this epic website. ^_^

I am a fan of ZOE & Gundam, but I don't know about Evangelion.
Well stating the mecha's name would be nice, & you may put some Evangelion mecha's as well.
I might do some readings regarding that...

Everything's all worked out in the story, and the EVA's do make an appearance.

If by stating the mecha's name, you mean verifying if the Gundams are the 'Destiny Gundam' or the 'Gundam F91', all Gundams in the story are mass-produced and are not directly derived from any particular story.

Although, later in the story, a few characters from G-Gundam will make an appearance.

why not give Celvice a Grafficane or a Scarmiglione
it would suit her better, i mean phil gets one of those and he isn´t even a grrl (though he looks like one)